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Check out my latest animated short "Sarthak! The Unforgivable!", my newest entry for TOFA 2011!
Dave Bruno is a Game Artist and Animator. He's animated for Lucky Charms and Trix Yogurt commercials, Facebook Social Games, Slot Machines, Steam Games and Studio Yotta shorts. He even has his own animated Youtube show "Scaredy Dave".
Dave Bruno
@ScaredyDave
Age 36, Male
Game Animator
Columbia College Chicago Alumn
Funnyvale, CA
Joined on 4/6/11
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Sarthak! The Unforgivable!
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Great stuff :)
Haha, I loved how you put yourself in the animation. There should've been actionous music though, because the film like, "moves along" on the same level all the time, with no climax or something. :)
I loved this exactly how i loved "Lost Heart, Found Danger". I love your animation skills and your humor too. I realy enjoyed it. It's almost perfect.
I'm sorry i don't give you a 10/10 because of some animators who are just a little better like Adam Phillips and his "The last of the dashkin". But you did a great work.
Impatient to see more.
Ps : Lost heart, Found danger, was excellent, better than when you try to make laugh, there was an wonderfull ambiance, when I watched it I realy was INTO your flash. It's just awesome, should be in the top 50 for me... It's actually MUCH MUCH better than the actual number one : "Bunnykill" because it doens't telle any story... just a gun fighting shit compared to story like yours.
Have a nice day dude, and keep it up, realy
I'm seeing some flawed logic here. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! And I appreciate your review, but giving me a 9 out of 10 because Adam Phillips exists isn't really how you're suppose to review things. Also, I see you gave Stainville a perfect 10, did that animation best Adam Phillip's work? I don't mind not getting a perfect 10, so long as there is a reason pertaining to my actual animation and a solid critique backing it up, but singling out my animation to be compared to Adam Phillips is a bit odd.
Otherwise I agree! I believe it deserved a 9 for what you listed below. LH,FD definitely had great writing backing it, and the style helped to. Sarthak was pretty much the opposite lol, not so great writing but great animation to make up for it. If I make it to the next round I'm going to try even harder, considering I'm getting such low scores for this entry.
you do know that when you win this round the rest of the competition will be easy as shit? Don't even try.. It's not worth the effort just so the others can submit inferior animations
FrozenFire
Really a step-up in linework in this one~
I enjoyed it :)
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